{"id":4066,"date":"2026-02-24T08:50:01","date_gmt":"2026-02-24T08:50:01","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/?p=4066"},"modified":"2026-02-24T08:50:01","modified_gmt":"2026-02-24T08:50:01","slug":"how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/","title":{"rendered":"How Can You Avoid Information Dumps \u2014 And Why Are They Sometimes Not a Good Practice?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If you have ever been told that your novel \u201cstarts too slow\u201d or that there is \u201ctoo much explanation,\u201d chances are you\u2019ve fallen into the trap of an information dump. It\u2019s one of the most common writing mistakes \u2014 especially in fantasy, science fiction, historical fiction, and thrillers where worldbuilding and backstory matter.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But here\u2019s the truth: information itself isn\u2019t the enemy. The problem is <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">how<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> and <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">when<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> it\u2019s delivered.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In this comprehensive guide, we\u2019ll explore what information dumps are, why they can harm your story, when they might actually work, and \u2014 most importantly \u2014 how to avoid them while still giving readers everything they need to know.<\/span><\/p>\n<div id=\"ez-toc-container\" class=\"ez-toc-v2_0_75 counter-hierarchy ez-toc-counter ez-toc-grey ez-toc-container-direction\">\n<div class=\"ez-toc-title-container\">\n<p class=\"ez-toc-title\" style=\"cursor:inherit\">Table of Contents<\/p>\n<span class=\"ez-toc-title-toggle\"><a href=\"#\" class=\"ez-toc-pull-right ez-toc-btn ez-toc-btn-xs ez-toc-btn-default ez-toc-toggle\" aria-label=\"Toggle Table of Content\"><span class=\"ez-toc-js-icon-con\"><span class=\"\"><span class=\"eztoc-hide\" style=\"display:none;\">Toggle<\/span><span class=\"ez-toc-icon-toggle-span\"><svg style=\"fill: #999;color:#999\" xmlns=\"http:\/\/www.w3.org\/2000\/svg\" class=\"list-377408\" width=\"20px\" height=\"20px\" viewBox=\"0 0 24 24\" fill=\"none\"><path d=\"M6 6H4v2h2V6zm14 0H8v2h12V6zM4 11h2v2H4v-2zm16 0H8v2h12v-2zM4 16h2v2H4v-2zm16 0H8v2h12v-2z\" fill=\"currentColor\"><\/path><\/svg><svg style=\"fill: #999;color:#999\" class=\"arrow-unsorted-368013\" xmlns=\"http:\/\/www.w3.org\/2000\/svg\" width=\"10px\" height=\"10px\" viewBox=\"0 0 24 24\" version=\"1.2\" baseProfile=\"tiny\"><path d=\"M18.2 9.3l-6.2-6.3-6.2 6.3c-.2.2-.3.4-.3.7s.1.5.3.7c.2.2.4.3.7.3h11c.3 0 .5-.1.7-.3.2-.2.3-.5.3-.7s-.1-.5-.3-.7zM5.8 14.7l6.2 6.3 6.2-6.3c.2-.2.3-.5.3-.7s-.1-.5-.3-.7c-.2-.2-.4-.3-.7-.3h-11c-.3 0-.5.1-.7.3-.2.2-.3.5-.3.7s.1.5.3.7z\"\/><\/svg><\/span><\/span><\/span><\/a><\/span><\/div>\n<nav><ul class='ez-toc-list ez-toc-list-level-1 ' ><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-1\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#What_Is_an_Information_Dump\" >What Is an Information Dump?<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-2\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#Why_Information_Dumps_Are_Sometimes_Not_a_Good_Practice\" >Why Information Dumps Are Sometimes Not a Good Practice<\/a><ul class='ez-toc-list-level-3' ><li class='ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-3\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#1_They_Kill_Narrative_Momentum\" >1. They Kill Narrative Momentum<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-4\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#2_They_Overwhelm_Readers\" >2. They Overwhelm Readers<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-5\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#3_They_Reduce_Emotional_Engagement\" >3. They Reduce Emotional Engagement<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-6\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#4_They_Remove_Mystery\" >4. They Remove Mystery<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-7\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#5_They_Feel_Like_Author_Intrusion\" >5. They Feel Like Author Intrusion<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-8\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#But_Are_Information_Dumps_Always_Bad\" >But Are Information Dumps Always Bad?<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-9\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#Common_Situations_Where_Writers_Fall_Into_Information_Dumps\" >Common Situations Where Writers Fall Into Information Dumps<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-10\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#How_to_Avoid_Information_Dumps_Practical_Techniques\" >How to Avoid Information Dumps (Practical Techniques)<\/a><ul class='ez-toc-list-level-3' ><li class='ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-11\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#1_Drip_Information_Slowly_The_%E2%80%9CIceberg%E2%80%9D_Method\" >1. Drip Information Slowly (The \u201cIceberg\u201d Method)<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-12\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#2_Show_Information_Through_Action\" >2. Show Information Through Action<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-13\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#3_Use_Dialogue_Strategically\" >3. Use Dialogue Strategically<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-14\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#4_Anchor_Backstory_to_Present_Conflict\" >4. Anchor Backstory to Present Conflict<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-15\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#5_Break_Information_Into_Scene-Sized_Pieces\" >5. Break Information Into Scene-Sized Pieces<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-16\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#6_Cut_50_of_Your_Exposition_Yes_Really\" >6. Cut 50% of Your Exposition (Yes, Really)<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-17\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#7_Trust_Reader_Intelligence\" >7. Trust Reader Intelligence<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-18\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#8_Enter_Scenes_Late_Exit_Early\" >8. Enter Scenes Late, Exit Early<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-19\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#A_Comparison_Information_Dump_vs_Integrated_Exposition\" >A Comparison: Information Dump vs Integrated Exposition<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-20\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#When_You_Actually_Should_Pause_for_Exposition\" >When You Actually Should Pause for Exposition<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-21\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#Genre-Specific_Considerations\" >Genre-Specific Considerations<\/a><ul class='ez-toc-list-level-3' ><li class='ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-22\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#Fantasy_Sci-Fi\" >Fantasy &amp; Sci-Fi<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-23\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#Thrillers\" >Thrillers<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-24\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#Literary_Fiction\" >Literary Fiction<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-25\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#Historical_Fiction\" >Historical Fiction<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-26\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#A_Simple_Self-Check_Test\" >A Simple Self-Check Test<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-27\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#Why_Writers_Struggle_With_Cutting_Information\" >Why Writers Struggle With Cutting Information<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-28\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#A_Balanced_Approach_Context_Without_Clutter\" >A Balanced Approach: Context Without Clutter<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-29\" href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/blog\/how-can-you-avoid-information-dumps-and-why-are-they-sometimes-not-a-good-practice\/#Final_Thoughts_Keep_the_Story_Moving\" >Final Thoughts: Keep the Story Moving<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/nav><\/div>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"What_Is_an_Information_Dump\"><\/span><b>What Is an Information Dump?<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">An <\/span><b>information dump<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> happens when a writer pauses the story to deliver a large chunk of background information, exposition, history, or explanation all at once.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">This often appears as:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Long paragraphs explaining the world\u2019s history<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Detailed political systems before the plot begins<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">A character\u2019s entire life story in chapter one<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Technical explanations inserted into fast-paced scenes<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Overly descriptive passages that halt momentum<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Instead of unfolding naturally, the story stops so the author can \u201cexplain things.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Readers don\u2019t usually say, \u201cThis is an information dump.\u201d They say:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cIt\u2019s slow.\u201d<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cNothing is happening.\u201d<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cI got bored.\u201d<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cIt feels like a textbook.\u201d<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">And that\u2019s the core issue.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Why_Information_Dumps_Are_Sometimes_Not_a_Good_Practice\"><\/span><b>Why Information Dumps Are Sometimes Not a Good Practice<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Let\u2019s break down the real reasons they can hurt your writing.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"1_They_Kill_Narrative_Momentum\"><\/span><b>1. They Kill Narrative Momentum<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Stories move forward through action, conflict, and character decisions. When you pause that movement for explanation, readers feel the brakes slam.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Momentum builds tension. Information dumps dissolve it.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If your protagonist is escaping danger, readers don\u2019t want a three-page history lesson about the kingdom.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"2_They_Overwhelm_Readers\"><\/span><b>2. They Overwhelm Readers<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Readers cannot absorb large blocks of unfamiliar information easily.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Imagine starting a fantasy novel and immediately learning:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Five kingdoms<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Three magic systems<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Two ancient wars<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">A royal family tree<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ten unfamiliar terms<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">It\u2019s cognitively exhausting.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">When overwhelmed, readers disengage.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"3_They_Reduce_Emotional_Engagement\"><\/span><b>3. They Reduce Emotional Engagement<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Emotion connects readers to story \u2014 not data.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Instead of:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The kingdom fell 200 years ago after the War of Silver Ashes\u2026<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Try:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Her grandmother still refused to speak of the night the kingdom burned.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">One invites curiosity. The other delivers a lecture.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"4_They_Remove_Mystery\"><\/span><b>4. They Remove Mystery<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Mystery is narrative fuel.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If you explain everything upfront, there\u2019s nothing left to discover. Readers enjoy piecing together information gradually.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Curiosity keeps pages turning.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"5_They_Feel_Like_Author_Intrusion\"><\/span><b>5. They Feel Like Author Intrusion<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">When exposition feels forced, readers become aware of the author explaining things instead of experiencing events through characters.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">And once readers become aware of the writer\u2019s hand too strongly, immersion breaks.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"But_Are_Information_Dumps_Always_Bad\"><\/span><b>But Are Information Dumps Always Bad?<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Not necessarily.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Like most writing \u201crules,\u201d this one has exceptions.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Information dumps can work when:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The voice is compelling (e.g., humorous narrator)<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The information itself creates intrigue<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">It\u2019s brief and sharply written<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">It appears at a natural pause in tension<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.barnettghostwriting.com\/\">The genre expects<\/a><\/strong> it (some literary fiction allows reflective exposition)<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">For example, some classic novels begin with extended description or context. But even there, the language itself creates atmosphere and emotion.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The key question isn\u2019t:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cAm I giving information?\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">It\u2019s:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cIs this information delivered in an engaging way that serves the story?\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Common_Situations_Where_Writers_Fall_Into_Information_Dumps\"><\/span><b>Common Situations Where Writers Fall Into Information Dumps<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Writers often dump information because they feel insecure that readers won\u2019t understand the story otherwise.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Here are typical triggers:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Complex worldbuilding<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Heavy backstory<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Technical research<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Political systems<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Emotional trauma history<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Character introductions<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The fear behind it:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cIf I don\u2019t explain this now, readers will be confused.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But readers are smarter \u2014 and more patient \u2014 than we give them credit for.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"How_to_Avoid_Information_Dumps_Practical_Techniques\"><\/span><b>How to Avoid Information Dumps (Practical Techniques)<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Now let\u2019s get into solutions.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"1_Drip_Information_Slowly_The_%E2%80%9CIceberg%E2%80%9D_Method\"><\/span><b>1. Drip Information Slowly (The \u201cIceberg\u201d Method)<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Instead of delivering everything at once, reveal information in layers.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Readers only need enough context to understand the current scene.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ask yourself:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">What must readers know <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">right now<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">?<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">What can wait?<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If it can wait, let it.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"2_Show_Information_Through_Action\"><\/span><b>2. Show Information Through Action<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Rather than explaining how a magic system works, show it in use.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Instead of:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In this world, fire magic requires emotional control and burns the user if mismanaged.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Try:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">His hands shook \u2014 and the flames bit back.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Action teaches faster than explanation.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"3_Use_Dialogue_Strategically\"><\/span><b>3. Use Dialogue Strategically<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Dialogue can naturally reveal backstory \u2014 but it must feel organic.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Avoid:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cAs you know, brother, our father died in the War of Thorns.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Use conflict or tension:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cYou sound just like him.\u201d<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> \u201cDon\u2019t compare me to Father.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Information emerges through emotional stakes.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"4_Anchor_Backstory_to_Present_Conflict\"><\/span><b>4. Anchor Backstory to Present Conflict<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Backstory becomes engaging when it directly impacts what\u2019s happening now.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If a character fears water, don\u2019t explain their childhood trauma randomly.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Reveal it when:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">They\u2019re forced onto a boat<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">They must save someone from drowning<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">They freeze in a rainstorm<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Make past relevant to present.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"5_Break_Information_Into_Scene-Sized_Pieces\"><\/span><b>5. Break Information Into Scene-Sized Pieces<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Instead of one long paragraph, distribute facts across scenes.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Think in terms of:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Mini-reveals<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Layered discovery<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Progressive clarification<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Readers enjoy assembling the puzzle.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"6_Cut_50_of_Your_Exposition_Yes_Really\"><\/span><b>6. Cut 50% of Your Exposition (Yes, Really)<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In revision, highlight all explanatory paragraphs.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ask:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Can I cut this?<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Can I reduce it by half?<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Can I turn it into action?<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Often, you\u2019ll find much of it is unnecessary.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"7_Trust_Reader_Intelligence\"><\/span><b>7. Trust Reader Intelligence<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">One of the biggest causes of information dumps is mistrust.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Writers think:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cReaders won\u2019t get it.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But readers enjoy inference.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Let them connect dots.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ambiguity can be powerful \u2014 as long as it\u2019s intentional.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"8_Enter_Scenes_Late_Exit_Early\"><\/span><b>8. Enter Scenes Late, Exit Early<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Many information dumps appear at scene beginnings.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Instead of:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Explaining the setting before action<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Start:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In the middle of movement or tension<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Context can follow naturally.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"A_Comparison_Information_Dump_vs_Integrated_Exposition\"><\/span><b>A Comparison: Information Dump vs Integrated Exposition<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Here\u2019s a practical breakdown:<\/span><\/p>\n<table>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td><b>Information Dump Style<\/b><\/td>\n<td><b>Integrated Storytelling Style<\/b><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Long historical explanation<\/span><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">A character references history during conflict<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Full biography in chapter one<\/span><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Traits revealed through behavior<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Technical breakdown of system<\/span><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">System demonstrated in action<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Description before action<\/span><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Description woven into movement<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Emotional trauma explained<\/span><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Trauma revealed through reactions<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The difference lies in <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">experience vs explanation<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"When_You_Actually_Should_Pause_for_Exposition\"><\/span><b>When You Actually Should Pause for Exposition<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">There are moments where a pause can work \u2014 but only when:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The story reaches a reflective lull<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The tone supports introspection<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The prose is compelling enough to carry attention<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The information changes reader understanding<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">For example, a reveal that reframes everything can justify a moment of explanation.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But even then, brevity is power.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Genre-Specific_Considerations\"><\/span><b>Genre-Specific Considerations<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Fantasy_Sci-Fi\"><\/span><b>Fantasy &amp; Sci-Fi<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">These genres are most vulnerable to information dumping because of complex worldbuilding.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tip:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Introduce world rules only when they affect character survival.<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Thrillers\"><\/span><b>Thrillers<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Pacing is everything.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tip:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Technical details should be short and urgent.<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Literary_Fiction\"><\/span><b>Literary Fiction<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Reflection is more acceptable \u2014 but emotional movement must continue.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tip:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tie exposition to psychological evolution.<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Historical_Fiction\"><\/span><b>Historical Fiction<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Research temptation is strong.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tip:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Use historical details as texture, not lectures.<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"A_Simple_Self-Check_Test\"><\/span><b>A Simple Self-Check Test<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">After writing a scene, ask:<\/span><\/p>\n<ol>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is anything happening right now?<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is there tension?<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is the character making decisions?<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does this explanation change the current stakes?<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Can this information be shown instead?<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If the answer to most is \u201cno,\u201d you may have an information dump.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Why_Writers_Struggle_With_Cutting_Information\"><\/span><b>Why Writers Struggle With Cutting Information<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Because they worked hard on it.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Research feels valuable.<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> Worldbuilding feels impressive.<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> Backstory feels important.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But readers care about story movement more than background detail.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">You are not deleting effort.<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> You are strengthening impact.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"A_Balanced_Approach_Context_Without_Clutter\"><\/span><b>A Balanced Approach: Context Without Clutter<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The goal isn\u2019t to eliminate exposition \u2014 it\u2019s to integrate it.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Think of exposition like seasoning in food.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Too little? Confusing.<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> Too much? Overwhelming.<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> Just enough? Perfect.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Your job is to calibrate.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Final_Thoughts_Keep_the_Story_Moving\"><\/span><b>Final Thoughts: Keep the Story Moving<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Information dumps are not \u201cbad writing\u201d \u2014 they\u2019re usually a sign of enthusiasm. You love your world. You love your characters. You want readers to understand everything.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But storytelling isn\u2019t about delivering data.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">It\u2019s about creating experience.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Let readers:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Discover<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Infer<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Question<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Connect<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Feel<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\n<p><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The most powerful stories trust readers to journey alongside the writer rather than sit in a classroom.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">So next time you feel the urge to explain everything at once, pause and ask:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Can I make the reader <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">experience<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> this instead?<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If the answer is yes \u2014 you\u2019re on the path to stronger, more immersive storytelling.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">And your readers will thank you by turning the page.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>If you have ever been told that your novel \u201cstarts too slow\u201d or that there is \u201ctoo much explanation,\u201d chances are you\u2019ve fallen into the trap of an information dump. It\u2019s one of the most common writing mistakes \u2014 especially in fantasy, science fiction, historical fiction, and thrillers where worldbuilding and backstory matter. 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